Draft Contents Page 2

This is my second draft for my contents page. It has become my second draft as after discussing the contents page with my target audience they still felt that the contents page needed much work as it didn't include the conventions that a normal rock magazine would include. After looking further into the way a Kerrang magazine is presented I realised the main thing  was missing was the quantity on the page. So for my final contents page I am going to possibly change the picture and change the layout of the contents page so it fits the profile of a rock magazine front cover. The things I am going to address are the use of pictures, font and the quantity on the page.